First Impression: Nice. It seems orderly with a lot of information. 9/10
Pictures: You have some nicely detailed pictures of this horse, with lots of different shots. I liked how you spread them around on the page, as opposed to having them in just one spot. 10/10
Gaits: He has nice gaits all around- he arches his neck, flexes his toes, and looks focused in everything that he does. He could work a bit more on getting the halt sooner, but he is good otherwise. 9/10
Temperment: He is definitely an arab! He has a fiery personality, but knows his limits. He is not shy in any way, and likes to please his handler. 9/10
Conformation: He has beautiful conformation with a nice, dishy face, elegant head, and defined legs. He is definitely above average for an SEA. 10/10
Information: Simple, realistic stats. They are right to the point, and I like how you provided that 'essay' of additional information. 10/10
Sire/Dam Info: It was interesting to read about his sire and dam, yet you kind of morphed the information into the grandsire and granddam. Maybe you could ad more about the features of the parents, such as conformation, show, progeny, etc.? 8/10
Show Record: You have a nicely detailed show record, but I would like to see how many points he has. Maybe you could tell how many points he earned in each class. 8/10
Overall Impression: It was enjoyable to evaluate your stallion. You have provided a lot of information on him, and it is easy to comprehend. Nicely done! 9/10
Overall Score: 92/100 (A)

 

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This stallion, Haziz Halim, is exceptionally beautiful as most egyptian arabs are. This boy has a very elegant arab head, with delicate features and very expressive eyes. He appears to be very delicate, but elegant, in the way he holds his head and carries himself. He has a well set arched neck with a good angled muscular shoulder. He carries himelf very well balanced, and steps light. Because of the angle of his shoulder, long legs, and muscled hindquarters, I can tell this boy has a very well balanced and long stride. He pushes himself with his hindqurters and is obviously very flashy. His coloring and markings making him an eye appealing stallion. There is nothing i can tell you about this stallion that you don't already know. He has awesome conformation, coloring, athletic ability, and movement.

Grade: A
Score: Excellent